Homework, I have decided to choose one of my favourite songs and make it formal. I have also tried to incorporate some aspects of frozen register.

 

Original song:                                 

Everybody needs inspiration
Everybody needs a song
A beautiful melody
When the nights are long
'cause there is no guarantee
That this life is easy
Yeah when my world is falling apart
When there's no light
To break up the dark
That's when I, I
I look at you
When the waves are flooding the shore
And I can't find my way home any more
That's when I, I
I look at you
When I look at you
I see forgiveness
I see the truth
You love me for who I am
Like the stars hold the moon
Right there where they belong
And I know I'm not alone
Yeah when my world is falling apart
When there's no light
To break up the dark
That's when I, I
I look at you
When the waves are flooding the shore
And I can't find my way home any more
That's when I, I
I look at you
You appear just like a dream to me
Just like kaleidoscope colours that cover me
All I need
Every breath that I breathe
Don't you know you're beautiful
Yeah yeah
When the waves are flooding the shore
And I can't find my way home any more
That's when I, I
I look at you
I look at you
Yeah
Whoa-oh
You appear just like a dream to me

 

Edited: Formal/Frozen Register:

All shalt devour inspiration
All shalt devour a song                                                        

An exquisite melody                        

When the dark hours art so timely

There is nix guarantee
That this life art not uneasy

Whilst my earth art freely crumbling
Whilst there art nix aglow 

That separates thy darkness
That art when I, I
I glance at you

As thy waves art flooding thy shore

As I struggle to find thy path home anymore

That art when I, I

I glance at you

As I peer at you

I detect forgiveness     

I see thy veracity 

Thou adore me for who I am

As thy stars cradle thy moon

Rightfully where they shalt be akin
And I appreciate I am alone no more

Yes, whilst my earth art freely crumbling

Whilst there art nix aglow

That separates thy darkness
That art when I, I
I glance at you

As thy waves art flooding thy shore 

As I struggle to find thy path home anymore
That art when I, I

I glance at you
Thou appears just as a dream to me

Just as kaleidoscope colours that art covering me
All I wish
Every breath that I breathe

Thou shalt know thou art beautiful
Yes, Yes
As thy waves art flooding thy shore
As I struggle to find thy path home anymore

That art when I, I

I glance at you

I glance at you

Yes
Thou appears just as a dream to me