I found that for my essay I could have learnt and included more terminology, ensured the power terms I did include were accurate, improved the PEE structure and planned it in a lot more detail so that I was able to expand on my points better.
Target- Work on the planning stage for my essays and learn more terminolgy, ensuring it is accurate.
Task- Replan my answer in a lot more detail including all the correct terminology I could have used for my language and power essay.